“This way, my dear,” Jet Set said. He was leading a white unicorn mare with a pink mane into his chambers. Many ponies in the Canterlot elite had certain relationships with those outside of their own. Being who Jet Set was, he had to imitate those ponies. His wife was away visiting a friend (or doing the same thing he was, it didn’t really matter to him) and that left him the opportunity to mimic others. He closed the door, and immediately the mare locked her lips with his. Jet Set pushed the mare away after a few moments. “My my, you’re a feisty one.” The mare giggled. Jet Set tried to move away from the door, but his body felt heavy. His eyes were slowly drifting downwards.
“What’s happening?” he asked. Again, the mare giggled. She walked in front of him and looked straight into his falling eyes.
“Behind every word is a hundred hooks,” she said. “A thousand fabrications, ten thousand lies. What’s happened is that I’ve reeled you in.” A scowl formed on Jet Set’s face.
“You,” he slurred. “Blue eyed harpy.” He fell to the ground as his eyes closed.
“Blue eyed harpy,” the mare said. Her voice was fading into silence. “That’s a new one. I’ve been called a siren, a temptress, a witch, a clepto, but never a harpy. It has a nice ring to it, though I prefer to go by Twinkle Shine now.”
After a few hours of ransacking Jet Set’s home, Twinkle Shine sat at the top of a building in downtown Canterlot. Beside her was a bulging sack with various trinkets and treasures stolen from Jet Set. She held a gold pocket watch in front of her.
“That was almost too easy,” she said. The watch was put into the bag. She twisted her neck causing it to crack. Her eyes looked down to the street where various ponies went on with their business. “Who should I reel in next?” She spotted a steel grey earth pony with a top hat on his head. Over his left eye was a monocle and he held himself as if he thought he was better than everypony. A grin appeared on Twinkle’s face.
“Hello, new fish. Let’s see if I can string you along.”
This was an intriguing snippet. I liked the details from Jet Set about his wife, and the attitude of Twinkle Shine. I think this could possibly be an interesting premise to run with in a longer form. Little does Twinkle Shine know that Fancy Pants is actually a government agent with a lot of training who can match her in her skill and seduction. At any rate, very interesting. Good job!