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Twilight-

That box is dark.

Too dark for you.

They told me that you’re just going to be in the box for a few hours, maybe a day, but I know the truth. Despite what you may hear, I’m not stupid.

I don’t think you’re ever coming out of that box.

They told me that you went for a long sleep, and forgot to wake up. They called it a coh-ma. I don’t know what that word means, but I’m not quite sure I want to find out.

I stayed by your bed every day and night, but you still didn’t wake up. You never used to sleep anywhere near this much.

They told me that they’re throwing a party, and everypony you know is going to be there. They told me that Shining Armor and the rest of your family is even coming down from Canterlot to see it. It was when I saw Fluttershy buying a black dress from Carousel Boutique that I got suspicious. She told me it was for the ‘funeral’.

I’m not quite sure what that word means, but it has ‘fun’ in it so it must mean something good.

They told me it was today, this afternoon, but I’m not sure that I want to go. The more I find out about this party, the more I’m not quite sure it’s a party. It’s beginning to sound more like a backwards party. I have a feeling that nopony will have any fun. I’m already late anyway. Nopony will care if I don’t show up at all.

I’m super-duper sorry to write this message in the form of a quick note. I put it in Rarity’s bag, so she’ll be sure to give it to you during the party after you wake up.

See you tomorrow!

Pinkie

Obscure Comments:

This one was interesting. Could it have been possible that the reason Pinkie seemed so out of it was that she was in shock over Twilight’s death? I thought it interesting that there was a bit of room for extrapolation like that. Good job!

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