Thirty Minute Pony Stories

It was just so sweet. Sweetie Belle’s mouth watered at the taste of the sugary treat. The deliciousness seemed never-ending. There were tantalising hints of mint, of spice, of so many other incredible tastes. She couldn’t begin to describe the sheer indulgence. She closed her eyes and savoured it, focusing her entire being on the infinite richness in her mouth.

And then there was the texture! She had expected it to be hard, like a pretzel or something, hard and chapped and lumpy. But it wasn’t solid at all — it practically melted between her lips. So soft, so warm, so fluid… She never would have guessed. Grown-ups never mentioned this sort of thing!

She rolled it about with her tongue. Tracing the contours. She knew she probably shouldn’t play with it, but it was just so good — she couldn’t help herself. It was getting a bit sloppy now, licking lips, sticky saliva getting everywhere. But somehow that just made it even more fun. Her breath escaped, rushing past her sweet. Her cheeks burned hot. She found herself leaning forward, wanting the taste to never end.

There was so much more than that, though. It wasn’t just a treat for her tastebuds.

It made her feel… happy, inside, in a whole bunch of different ways. Warmth seeped out from her mouth, spreading into every part of her body, from the bottom of her hooves to the end of her tail and the tip of her horn, which she felt sparking with overflowing magic. Her heart pounded with new-found energy and excitement, sending sugary blood rushing. Her head was spinning. She bubbled up with happiness. It was like her whole life had been building up to this one sweetness.

And it was all just for her.

Finally, Sweetie Belle pulled back and opened her eyes. Twist gave her a shy smile from behind those adorable glasses.

“Wow, Twist,” Sweetie Belle gasped. “I… I never realised kissing could be so… so…”

“I know, right? …Wanna do it thome more?”

“Yes!”

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RWL’s Commentary

Hehe, the Twist was pretty obvious, but it was also really enjoyable. Twist and Sweetie seem really cute together, and the description of Sweetie’s first kiss was amazingly detailed and evocative. You really get a sense of how intensely she’s enjoying it. Wonderful work!